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Feature of the Week: Damian Ho’s short story ‘The Tornado Whip’

The nine-year-old student from International Christian School recounts a chaotic spin on a thrilling water ride
byPosties readers
Published: 12:30am, 03 Aug 2026
Length: 348 words
Feature of the Week: Damian Ho’s short story ‘The Tornado Whip’

Damian Ho, a nine-year-old student from International Christian School, recounts a memorable water slide ride with his father. Photo: Handout

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The floor felt wet and hard when I grabbed my soggy, blue board with wrinkled fingers. I was determined to go on the Tornado Whip water slide.

My father was scared of it because the ride started up high and he was afraid of heights. Still, I made him go on the Tornado Whip.

After he calmed himself down, we went up the stairs.

The wind was strong, hitting against me. I was also already drenched, so it felt colder. It was a long way up. I realised my dad was 10 steps behind.

“Hurry up!” I shouted.

I panted as I stopped to wait for him. He was as slow as a turtle, taking one step every five seconds. I saw a view at the back, where solar panels and greenhouses lay.

Then, my dad arrived.

“One more flight of stairs!” I said. When we got there, I put on my board and stepped inside the capsule through the open door. Water trickled down my back. The door closed. Outside, I could see my dad trembling.

“3, 2, 1,” the machine said.

I was hit by a sudden wave of cold because the hidden platform under my feet disappeared. Immediately, I fell through. The tube was transparent and in 20 seconds I was covered in water.

“Hey! Why am I floating?” I asked myself. “Maybe it’s over.”

“Ah!” I heard my dad scream. He was halfway through, and before you knew it, he was out of the slide.

Hopeful, I walked to my dad and asked, “Again?”

“Nope,” my dad replied firmly. “We are leaving.”

“Grr,” I thought, lightly punching him. But I felt so grateful that he actually went on the ride with me despite his fear of heights.

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